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A Warrior Of Youth

Chapter Twenty Two: A good morning

Lissas POV

I wasn't sure how long I was awake. Jake was still asleep, softly snoring.
I think I was just anxious to see how this would play out. He said he loved me and I returned the feeling. That was the first time we had ever said it out loud. It was definitely a good morning, but God I was sore. Just trying to get to sleep afterwards was a task.
I cringed at every move he made inside me. Was I meant to be enjoying it? I knew it would hurt, but that fucking hurt.
He licked me out afterwards, so I felt a little better.
I felt Jake stir in his sleep, but then his eyes fluttered open and focused on me.
"Morning beautiful" he said giving me a sleepy smile.
"Morning" I said gently kissing his lips.
"You were pretty good last night, for a virgin anyways."
"Glad to know it was good for you" I said cuddling up to him.
"Was it not good for you?" he asked with worried tone.
"No, no. It was. Just... kinda... hurt... a little..."
"Liss, you should have told me. I could have slowed down" he said wrapping his arms around me.
"Its okay. I didn't mind."
"You're a weird one" Jake said kissing my cheek.
We laid in bed for a while longer starting to dose off again, when we started to hear voices come from the rest of the house.
"I suppose we better get up" I said removing the blanket and slipping my dress on. As I moved around, it felt like my insides were tearing or something. It felt off. I tried not to think about it and just act normal.
We walked into the kitchen where Sammi was making a breakfast of eggs and bacon while Jinxx set the table.
"Hey guys, where's Sandra?" I asked.
"She's still asleep. Go check out where she crashed" Jinxx said, cocking his head towards the stairs.
Me and Jake looked at each other then raced upstairs to see what they could be talking about.
Sandra was sleeping underneath the table that was outside on the balcony.
"Guys! You should have woken her up! It's freezing outside. They said it might snow soon" I said sliding the door open and wincing at the cold air.
I crawled under the table and gently shook Sandra so would wake up.
"Err" she mumbled as she turned her head away from me.
"Sandra, you fell asleep outside. Do you want to move inside to a couch?" I said shaking her again.
"But I am inside" she said in a croaky voice.
"Sweetie, can't you feel how cold it is?"
"Nup."
"Well, I'm dragging you inside anyways. You'll get sick if you stay out here" I said grabbing her arms and dragging her limp body into the house.
Jake had gone back downstairs with the others and left me with Sandra.
"Sandra... Do you think I'm going to make it to senior year?" I asked sort of to her and sort of to myself. I was just thinking out loud.
"Probably not" she mumbled into the floor.
I was a little shocked at her words "What do you mean I won't make it?"
"Dude, you tore apart the most popular friends group. You turned two of them against the others, you broke up a long term couple and you brought up old shit" she letting all my mistakes flow out of her mouth.
"You really think that?" I said a little shakily.
"Yeah, I mean, you come out of nowhere and fuck some shit up. Like it's entertaining to watch. It's almost worth getting beat up over."
I was kinda hurt. She's getting a kick out of other peoples misery that I caused.
"Dude are you still drunk?" I said just to change the topic.
"Yep."
Drunk people never lie.

Notes

A horrible chapter. I know.
Kinda a filler so I can get to the plot twist.
So PLEASE bare with me! It will get better!
I have been sooooooooo busy the last few days. I have been so pissed off that I haven't been able to post a chapter..
This one is kinda short, but my mind is dead and I just want to get to the interesting bit.

I've also been thinking about doing a spin off story from my previous two stories. I know those two are kinda popular and people do like them, but I would finish this one first.
I'm trying to figure out the best ending for this one, when the time comes. I'll still aim for 30 chapters... so maybe another 8... we'll see.
Please comment guys! Would love to know what you think of all this!
-Tina xx

Comments

Hello everyone!
Not sure if you will read this, but here goes.
My account fucked up so I started on a new one. My stories will remain here, but Before The Angels Fell will continue on my other account 'tinamoli'
I'm so sorry about this. It is a massive in convience to us all.

tinamoli tinamoli
4/22/15

this was akwardly very expected that she would die in a car accident. the last chapter made me feel like that was gonna happen. sad tho..

WolfieSkyes WolfieSkyes
12/26/14

@Ravens tail 7
I hate endings too, but all stories must end somewhere. I know it was sad and all that shiz :P but I just thought not all stories have a happy ending. And thank you so much! I'm glad you still like it and dont hate me for killing Lissa. That was hard. I had originally thought for her to commit suicide, but then thought, what if she gets what she wants and goes home, but something as simple and common as a car crash seemed to kind of fit better with the whole being insignificant issue.

@bvbangel81
@dead_on_the_inside
I know guys. You probably hate for doing that, but yeah.. if you read above in the other reply I explain my reasons. It just fit. I really wanted to kind of show that the Gandhi quote may be true in a way, but everything you do creates a ripple effect.

@TheOutlawAndAndy!! @bvbchika
Awwwww thank you! I was getting really sad when I wrote the part where Jake finds out.. They had just declared their love for each other again and the most horrific accident happens. I'm glad you like my last bit. I wanted to contradict the Gandhi quote cause not everything is insignificant.

It's weird when all you guys say I'm a good writer. I just get ideas. I don't know how or why, I just do. This is just a creative outlet for me that I love to do.
You guys can read my other stories if you haven't already.. My next story will be a spin off about CC and Kimber.... Already have ideas for them hahah
Thank you so much for commenting guys! I was freaking out when I saw 7 new comments and reading them makes me so happy! So literally, thank you so fucking much! I love you guys :) <3


tina tina
12/13/14

Crying because this ending is so good!!!!! holy crap you are an amazing writer

bvbchika bvbchika
12/13/14

Brought tears to my eyes.. The last sentence.. That was beautiful..