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We Don't Belong

Chapter 33

Rose's POV:

*dream*

I'm standing in the same ghostly bedroom, the lack of furniture maintaining the errie ambiance. The mirror is gone, and she is nowhere to be seen either.

I take hesitant steps towards the window; the only thing in the room. Glancing out it, a lovely view of the cemetery and a town's gloomy ruins make up the horrific landscape. A soft breeze blows through the open frame, causing for small goosebumps to rise on my bare forarms.

"Beautiful, isn't it?" A cool voice sounds beside me.

I dont even bother turning to face her, I already am aware of her dark presence.

"In a dead, dark, haunting way, it's quite extroardinary. How something that lacks life can be as amazing as something full of life. The thin line between life and death mark the only darkness within this amazing thing we call our existence."

"But you don't exist," I remind her smartly.

"I do, maybe not physically. Yet, at least. Anyways, I'm apart of your subconscious, so mentally I exist. And existence, is all I need, to be alive." She says, approaching me from behind.

She stops when her chest touches my shoulder blades, and my breathing falters. She's I've cold.

"Cold? Aren't i? It's because my body moves and functions like yours, but blood doesn't pool throughout my veins. I'm alive, but not. And I need blood if I want to live." Her voice drips malice and her stance speaks horror.

"And that's where you come in," in one fluent, strong motion, she shoves me out the window.

I open my mouth to scream as I make impact on the ground.

Notes

Another dream chapter (they're really fun to write!)

so um, I've noticed this with a lot of stories, not just mine, and I'm sure my fellow authors will agree with this too. Writing a chapter actually takes time and thinking believe it or not. And it's time I could be doing homework, studying, or anything else, but instead I choose to write a chapter, for you guys. And sure sometimes I write for myself, because I've got a great idea or whatnot, but mostly I feel like as an author, it's my duty to update. That's where you guys come in.

It makes me feel awful to see zero new comments on my story. Actually, I feel like deleting my story and I feel worthless. Because I feel like, okay people liked my last chapter, and commented, but hated this chapter since they didn't comment.

So basically, if you like the chapter, or the story, comment. If you want an update after a long time, comment. If you hated the chapter and thought it needs work, comment. it honestly makes the authors day :)

so yeah, my mini rant is over.
thx for being beautiful <3

Comments

This is so awesome! XD

Okay I couldn't put this story down. This is great and my heart broke when it ended. I just know the sequel is gonna be fantastic!

DarkOne_22 DarkOne_22
12/29/14

I freaking loved this story! It's is literally one of my favorites and one of the best ones I have read yet! I will be keeping an eye out for the sequels...I'm very excited for it!

MyOwnDownfall MyOwnDownfall
12/16/14

O my god!! That was soo good!

Kayla_Ash Kayla_Ash
12/16/14

That was such a good ending! I'm so sad though! Im really excited for the sequel! :)

eclaire eclaire
12/16/14