Life of Dakota

Hey guys. So this is going to be my first story and chapter i've ever written on here.. I'm 13 and i may write long chapters since i write a lot at school. But please tell me what you's all think about the first chapter and whether or not i should carry on :/ anyway lets start this story! :D P.S: i will try to update eveyday :)



Saturday... The last Saturday of the Summer Holidays :( Only 2 more days till i start year 11... The most stressful year of secondary school (GCSE's). Great. "Dakota! Get ready now! We're leaving for the beach soon!" Mum yelled from her bedroom. Woohoo a day at the beach. What a nice way to spend one of the last days of the Summer Holidays at the beach and to just sun bathe :)

I enthusiastically jumped out of bed and ran to my wardrobe. I swung it wide open and decided what to wear. I decided to wear my 'Black Veil Brides'' vest and some black shorts (black is one of my favourite colours). As it was so gonna be another hot day, I might as well wear 'less weighed' clothes. Black clothes was what i usually wear, or bvb merchandise, and mum didnt seem to complain which was kinda nice i guess.. Considering she's more of a floral type of person who loves to wear pearls and all that stuff.. Eugh.. I hate wearing them! After getting changed i went into my personal bathroom and brushed my teeth and all that, then i finally came round to doing my make up. I decided to apply abit of black eye liner
around my eye lids and a dab of black eye-shadow. Then i teased my hair until i seemed quite satisfied with my look :)

***TIME LAPSE***

After finally settling down in the car (it took us half an hour to get Hilary dresses! Half an hour! She just kept on running around the whole of the frigging house and hiding behind furniture so that mum couldn't catch her and dress her... until she finally gave up :P). "Everybody ready?!" My dad cheerfully says. Thats partly what i love about dad. He's always so cheerful and full of joy and always tries to make you feel better when you're upset... He can even make you laugh your head off when you don't feel like laughing at all!

"Yes, we are!" We all replied back. I jammed on my headphones, and started listening to Black Veil Brides . I Am Bulletproof was the first song that i played. Even though i' usually feel mostly happy all the time i still feel relaxed listening to the words of their songs, as their songs are so supportive and are always about standing up for yourself and getting back on your feet when people try to put you down.

***20 minutes later****

Half way through listening to the seventh song. I hear a loud beeping sound coming from my right hand side. It gradually gets louder and louder. Why?! I turn my head towards the sound. As soon as i turn my head around, i feel like everything is happening in slow motion. All the glass shatters near me and all of a sudden I black out.

Notes

Hey guys please could you leave a comment on what you's think of the first chapter. I am dying to write the next chapter (chapter two) so it'll be released very quickly! :)