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Daddy's Little Girl

Chapter Seventeen: It Doesn't Fits

I'm not liking this girl at all. And she doesn't looks nowhere like Travis, I sat at the bar while the guys were continuing their conversation with her. Jinxx came in and sat next to me.
"Are you okay?", he asked.
"Yeah, why asking?"
"I thought you were going to get excited over my niece, though.."
"She doesn't even looks like Travis. She has blue eyes.."
"Her mother has blue eyes.."
"Very weird..Are you sure she's who say she is?", I asked.
"Want further proof?"
"If you can get it", I said as I went back to the living room. She was sitting between CC and Andy. I sat next to Jake and gave her a glare. She's beautiful, totally! But something tells me there's nothing good coming out of this and I can feel it. Maybe she's just another girl looking for money and fame.
"Why are you staring at her like that?", Jake asked.
"No reason.."
"Sure, Purdy?" I nodded. I standed up and went upstairs to my bedroom. Something doesn't fits here, it just doesn't fits.

Notes

Comments

@i don't belong
I'm not sure if I want to write a sequel....but, probably I will since I got some new ideas I want to play around with

ShayBiersack ShayBiersack
11/30/14

is it really over, this was like the best story I got my account

i don't belong i don't belong
11/30/14

@MrsBVB

yeah. because this is amazing!

demon_emo_child demon_emo_child
11/21/14

@demon_emo_child
I'm not good at writing killer sequels...but, maybe I should try

ShayBiersack ShayBiersack
11/21/14

@MrsBVB

its okay. though it would make for a killer sequel!

demon_emo_child demon_emo_child
11/21/14