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Homepage › Stories › Now You See Me, Now You Don't › Chapter 26

Now You See Me, Now You Don't

IMPORTANT!!!

HEY GUYS!

Thanks to @Dandygirl444 I noticed that last chapter was a bit... off.


":( I just read it, so as soon as she comes alive they have a makeout session? He HARDLY feels bad or they dont even make it a deal that she had just DIED! and how "sorry" he was. Im not mad. still love the story. just needs some love."


I din't explain very well, so now I edited and maybe now you can understand better.

Please tell me if it's better!


Constructive criticism is ALWAYS appreciated!!! <3

Notes

Continue reviewing, please. This way I can fix any mistake I haven't realized. <3

Comments

Please update!! I really like the idea behind this story and can't wait to read more!

Starrheart Starrheart
7/28/16

Heeeeey

Ren SnowWolf Ren SnowWolf
5/23/15

@CrymsynFyre808 Thank you, I will! And yes! I plan they meeting each other and.... I won't give spoiler! Muahahaha

@I am your Shadow.. @Ren SnowWolf I'm sorry I took so long... here it is! ^^

Stone Bloodshed Stone Bloodshed
1/15/15

@CrymsynFyre808 Thank you, I will! And yes! I plan they meeting each other and.... I won't give spoiler! Muahahaha

@I am your Shadow.. @Ren SnowWolf I'm sorry I took so long... here it is! ^^

Stone Bloodshed Stone Bloodshed
1/15/15

I love it! Please update soon? Also maybe have Angels mom get introduced to Ronnie? I think that would be interesting.

CrymsynFyre808 CrymsynFyre808
1/15/15
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