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Unbroken

looking back

ronnies POV
i sat in my room and listened to black sabbath alone. it was good to be an only child though my mom got knocked up and now i'll have a little brother. i've always wanted a brother but im scared he'll get all the attention like he has been since she got pregnant. his name will be max and he's due really soon and my mom is at the ultrasound for him.
i shut the screen and decided to go to my guitar and play when i heard a knock on the door. my dad opened it with tears in his eyes. what happened? he told me to get in the car and we went to the hospital. i got there and i saw the doctor had a grim expression as i was led into a room where my mom was crying.
"i'm sorry to inform you that max didnt make it" the doctor told me.
three years later
i took the pills. its been three years since max was stillborn. i'll never have a brother. the depression took over me since then and now my life is getting high and sleeping in my mom's basement. more ecstacy. i popped in the pills and started to feel the effects but it didnt feel right this time something was off. i finally took to much. i heard my mom scream my name and then blackness.

i woke up but not to anything just a big white emptyness but there was a man standing over me with tears in his eyes.
"who--" i was cut off.
"im max" he stated. my mind went blank.
"it's bad enough they lost me now its your fault they outlived every one of their children" he said followed by him kicking me and dissappearing. i looked around and was suddenly really pissed. im dead. i stomped and there was a tiny crack in the flawless landscape.

~~end of flashback~~

andy POV
"no you have to be punished that was not long enough" max yelled.
"it was fair he served his time" gerard stated obviously trying to make max calm down.
"whats going on?" i asked but they ignored me.
"max--" ronnie was cut off with tears in his eyes by max.
"no its your fault their life is a living hell, i wouldnt wish it upon anyone but you but you deserve to be a demon, god i swear if there was a hell!" max kept yelling as i saw tears well up in ronnie's eyes. he finally cut him off.
"im sorry, but it's not all my fault you were the one who made me do it" he yelled back.
"no i didnt do anything i sat and watched you destroy yourself i wouldve lived if i could and you know that" max yelled and i saw tears come to his eyes.
"max" ronnie said in a calmer tone stepping closer to him.
"no" max said and dissappeared. i stood there awkwardly as we all looked at each other. ronnie dissappeared as well.

Notes

this is a flashback so you understand all of the tension between ronnie and max. and understand max gets reancarnated somewhere else each time but with ronnie was the only time he was reancarnated with a sibling

Comments

@wild_one
Really!? Aww. I feel so happy now that I've made someone smile. :3 like that's the first time someone's said that to me. :)
@JINXXismyHero_Love_Him_Forever
Awwwweee thank you :) dont worry i dont plan on stopping writing any time soon just this story i might continue it later or make a prequal or something. but seriously your comment made me smile for the first time in a while
wild_one wild_one
4/29/13
I love this. :/ I want to read more.
You have an amazing talent with writing. You shouldn't stop.
@Mak-a-doodle
thank you but i'm discontinuing this i just dont like it as much as i used to. but thanks for the comment i appreciate you reading :)
wild_one wild_one
4/28/13
Can you please update soon. I want another chapter please and thank you.
Mak-a-doodle Mak-a-doodle
3/21/13