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My Outlaw

The next show

As a surprise, Remorse and Silence went first. The other bands were shocked when Michelle started talking, which they have never done before.
“What’s up all you bitches? I am the lead singer, Micci.”
“I’m lead guitar, J.B.”
“I’m the drummer, L.J.”
“And I’m the bass player, Mattie.”
“Together, we are Remorse and Silence. Enjoy the show!” They jumped into a song I guess Michelle wrote.
You want pain?
Well you got it, bitch.
I can’t stand your fucking face anymore.
I have sat in Silence,
Waiting for it to stop,
But you just never end it,
So now I have had enough!

I lived in Remorse and Silence,

Waiting for you to end your game,
But since you don’t want it to be over
How about I show you some Remorse and Silence?

Pretty little bitch,

Sad little bitch,
Can’t you just leave me alone?
It’s time you learned your lesson,
My fist will connect with your pretty little nose!

I lived in Remorse and Silence,

Waiting for you to end your game,
But since you don’t want it to be over
How about I show you some Remorse and Silence?

BIIIIIIIIIIITTTTCCCCCHHHHH! (SCREAMED) (Awesome bass solo)


I lived in Remorse and Silence,

Waiting for you to end your game,
But since you don’t want it to be over
How about I show you some Remorse and Silence?

Remorse!


And!


Silence!


Bitch!


The crowd went wild with that one song. Michelle and the rest of the band had the biggest smiles on their faces. Before I could hear what Michelle was going to say, Dahvie tapped me on my shoulder.
“They never spoke before. And they have never gone on twice. Do you know them?” I smiled.
“Yup. The lead singer is a good friend of mine. I convinced her and the rest to do the whole tour. They wanted to go on again tonight, and they got to, since Ronnie has a sore throat and to leave to the next location early. You guys are playing today, right?” He nodded.
“Yup. Jayy is getting ready, but I have been for a little while now. We go on after the band after Remorse and Silence.” Just then, Michelle tackled me.
“That. Was. AWESOME! I can’t believe they reacted like that!” I smiled at her.
“Micci, this is Dahvie, from BOTDF. Dahvie, this is Micci. Not her real name, by the way.” She smiled, and her and Dahvie had a nice conversation. I saw nobody was really talking to Matthew, so I ran over and hugged him. “You did AWESOME! And you mastered the skills so quickly! I’m going to try to teach you as much as possible.” He smiled, and then Ashley joined us. We talked and watched the rest of the show until it was time for us to hit the road.

Notes

What did you guys think of the song?
It is the first song I ever wrote, years back, which inspired the name of a band if I ever had one.
I think it needs changed a little,
But I think I will keep it as is.
Respond to it please!
:)
Love you guys!!!

Comments

I'm interested in being your co-author...however I don't really know your characters...and I don't know where you're headed with it...

Havic Fortuna Havic Fortuna
2/12/14

@Purdy 4ever

I'm too scared. I haven't even put up my stories I been working on.

@Ashlynnkickedface

You don't have to write good, as long as you can write I'm good with you helping me

CountryEmoGirl CountryEmoGirl
2/11/14

@Purdy 4ever

I would, but I don't write good.

@Ashlynnkickedface

I'm still going to write it, I'm just grounded for...a week I think. I want to get a chapter out before then so I can rough draft another one.
Plz message me ppl!

CountryEmoGirl CountryEmoGirl
2/11/14