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Fallen Angel

Promise me

She stood outside the gold emblazoned building with the doorman as her only company. With Anna's help, she picked out a short but sweet red v-neck dress.

"You're that girl that lives around the corner, right?" The doorman asked.

"Yeah," Sophie said. "I'm just waiting for my date."

"He doesn't know?"

Sophie shook her head. "I really just want to impress him. I don't want to scare him off."

"Understandable." The doorman said. "Is that him there?" He pointed to the sleek black car that had pulled up to the curb.

Sophie watched Andy get out of the car and walk up the steps towards her. "Yes." She smiled.

"Wow, you look amazing." Andy said. "I've never seen you in anything other than scrubs."

Sophie blushed and smiled.

"You ready?" Andy asked.

"Yeah, let's go." Sophie took the hand he had extended for her and allowed him to lead her to the car.

He opened her door for her and she slid into the black leather seat. Sophie had never been in such an expensive looking car. Andy got in on his side, started the car and drove off down the street.

The first few minutes were silent. Sophie didn't know what to say. What did people talk about on dates? She figured she would just sit there quietly and let Andy focus on the winding, busy street ahead of him.

"So, you like music?" Andy asked, breaking the awkward silence.

"Huh? Oh... Uh..." Sophie hesitated. "Yeah, music is cool."

"Yeah? What type do you like?" Andy glanced over at her.

Now what was she supposed to say? She really liked Andy a lot and she didn't want to fuck things up with him not even fifteen minutes into their date.

"Oh, you know... Pretty much anything. I can find something I like in everything." Sophie lied.

"Huh, okay. Well, maybe you'll like this." Andy reached over and turned the volume on the stereo up.

Sophie listened to the drum beats, the pulsing bass, the guitar riffs and the sound of the singer's voice mixing together and creating a sound that she instantly fell in love with.

"Who is this?" She pointed to the stereo.

"Kiss." Andy said.

"Wait... Kiss?" Sophie was slightly taken aback. Did he just demand she kiss him?

"Yeah...?" Andy looked at her as if she had two heads. "You don't know who Kiss is?"

Sophie shook her head.

"They're only one of the best rock bands ever." Andy explained.

"Oh..." Now she understood. "Hey, where are we going exactly?"

"You'll see." Andy said as he pulled into an empty parking lot and parked the car.

Andy got out and walked around to the other side to help Sophie get out.

"Okay, close your eyes." Andy said.

"Wait, what?" Sophie got nervous.

"Close your eyes. Just trust me."

Sophie sighed as Andy held both her hands and she closed her eyes. Andy gently pulled on her hands and she let him lead her in any direction he pleased.

"Okay, we're going up stairs now." He warned. "I just don't want you to trip. But don't worry, we're almost there."

"Okay, Andy, okay." Sophie smiled and even though she couldn't see it, he smiled too.

It was almost like a reflex. He couldn't help but smile every time he saw her smile. She was even more beautiful when she smiled.

He led her to the top of the stairs and to the middle of the platform they were standing on.

"Okay, open your eyes." Andy said.

When Sophie opened her eyes, she saw that they were above the city. The city lights glowed bright against the dark sky. It was absolutely breathtakingly beautiful. She never knew that the city could hold such wonder and be so beautiful.

"Andy, it's..." She couldn't find the words to finish the sentence.

Andy sat down on the concrete and Sophie joined him, laying down on her back to look up at the stars. She tugged on the sleeve of Andy's leather jacket and he laid down, putting his head next to hers.

"See that right there? The 'W' shape in the sky?" Sophie pointed out the stars that created the shape. "That's the constellation Cassiopeia; the queen. And right next to her? That's the king. See, it kind of looks like an upside down house." Sophie explained.

"Oh, yeah. I see it. That's cool. How do you know that?" Andy looked over at her.

"I took a class in high school," She said, keeping her eyes fixed on the stars. "And I look up at the sky at night a lot." She looked over at him.

She stared into his perfect, ice blue eyes. She studied his face carefully as if it would be the last time she would ever see him and she didn't want to forget what his every feature looked like.

He looked down at her small pink lips and pressed his against them. She felt her eyes slip close and his warm breath on her neck. It was like pure ecstasy.

He pulled away and looked at her. "Promise me that we can do this again?"

She smiled. "Promise."


Thanks for the shout out. Love this story
Please update. Really enjoying it despite it being so sad!
BVBfan101 BVBfan101
Noooo! :,(
i could only imagine his sad broken hearted face..
IsisChaos IsisChaos
is she literally dead um what this can't be happening
leeexiij leeexiij
Update soon