The Adopted - Comments

@BVB'SBitch
I've been to a concert with about 115,000 people, it was hectic, you couldn't even hear the music over everyone's screams

@Mezzy18
it really is, that was actually the biggest concert I've ever been too and it was WILD

OoF, 112,000? That is a LOT of people in one place.

Well its better than a bag of dicks tattoo

What other secrets? O.O

"ooohh Hannah and Storm are gonna get freaky," wait a second... "Cc you're such a child!"

That was me.

@Mezzy18
Really? I was trying so hard to make it as sweet as possible so that is such a relief to hear!!

Ahhhhhggg I freakin love Storm and Hannah's relationship, It'S sO CuTE

Aww, sweet chapter. Lol, Andy really did sound like a little kid just then :)

@Mezzy18
All in due time!

Awesome chapter! can't wait for more. I'd absolutely love to be skilled in the cello, it's such a beautiful instrument with a unique sound and overall vibe. Also, am curious about her previous foster family. I wonder why she went back to the orphanage?

@Mezzy18
Thank you so much, I appreciate it. I was aware of that, I've just been meaning to fix it, but it is fixed now! So thank you for motivating me to fix it lol

This is a really cool book so far, you're definitely a talented writer. :) But, are you aware that this story is marked off as completed?

@miafumiko
thank you! I'll be posting more very soon!

This story is really good!!!! more please!!