Picture Perfect? - Comments

@Merelan
Thanx, I appreciate it. That was the first story I ever published, so it was always nice to know that it didn't suck.

"dimwitted silicone bimbo" - I love that! Enjoying this story too, I didn't know you'd written this one!
ETA: I sat down and read this straight through, it was that good! Well done! :)

@BorderlineBarbie
Whenever you have time , it's not going anywhere ! Thanx !

@Red Phoenix77
Thanks for telling me (: I will check it out for sure! But I'll be busy today, just so you know I will probably be able to read it the coming week end.

@BorderlineBarbie
Thanx , glad you're enjoying it ! Just to let you know , the second chapter has disappeared for some weird reason , ( I'll be reposting it soon ) but it shouldn't cause too much trouble with following the storyline . I'll also be posting a chapter of my other story this evening , if you're interested in checking that out .

I just read you first chapter and I think it's reaaaallyy nice! Keep it up xx

@Red Phoenix77
Yes! Have you seen the pictures of him with his friends kids? You can just tell he's gunna be such a good dad one day

@bvb-army
Thanx , glad you liked it ! I thought that would be a pretty cool birthday surprise . I kind of think that he'd be a pretty good dad , I can sort of picture him spoiling a kid rotten , and doing all sorts of fun things with them . It just seems to suit his personality .

This is sooo cute!

I just noticed that Chapter Two has vanished for no readily apparent reason . Does anyone know if there's a way to make it come back , or am I going to have to rewrite it ? If so , how do I put it back in the right spot ?

@Red Phoenix77
It is 100000000% definitely not sucking:) Same with mine, I started two and they're the first pieces of writing I've ever let anyone see so we're in the same boat

@bvb-army
Thanks , I'm glad to hear it ! This is my first story , so it's good to know that it's not totally sucking .

Literally just realised you're the person who commented on one of my stories. I've been following this since I found it about 15 Chapters in and OMG I LOVE IT! My stomach has been flipping and I've been smiling all the way through this chapter

As I was looking things over , I noticed that an entire paragraph has dropped from the first chapter for no readily apparent reason . So to minimize any confusion this might cause , between Devlin's phone call and when she tells Ashley to check his phone , Tanya tells Dev that she has called him multiple times and gotten no answer . I also noticed a typo , which was entirely my bad . Arkansas is south of St . Louis , not north .