Princess? No Bitch, Queen. - Comments

Please update

Awesome, can't wait for more XD

@tina
will do x aha

@x_.mxxixxa._x
don't worry. it happens to everyone.
Give my stories a read and see what you think :)
* there is an order to them since they are kinda connected. hah

@tina
ahaha that's true, I try so hard to make it well presented and stuff that I end up making more mistakes xP

@x_.mxxixxa._x
All good.
And I know the feeling. I have spent hours writing some of my chapters. I know there are mistakes, but I know what I meant haha.
But yeah, its really hard to find decent stories on here where people use proper spelling and grammar. I won't read it otherwise.

@tina
thanks for feedback x I legit wrote this on like 2 hours sleep ahaha will try and make it better next time x

Good set up of summary and character descriptions.
Click on the first chapter and its a block of words.
Sorry, I just hate when its just a clump of sentences cause it makes it hard to read and understand the flow of the story.
You definitely have something in the storyline. You have good spelling and grammar, just need to adjust the flow.
Always happy to proof read before you post :)
-Tina