Black Halo ~ Twisted Innocence - Comments

@NeedToBreathe
Well as a seasoned writer I'm gonna give you some advice: don't leave holes in your stories. The background Information matters and explanations need to happen. Adding a shit-ton of characters makes the written work more confusing than necessary. Keep this in mind as you write this further because this could be very interesting.

@We are young and we are strong
There are some things you wouldn't know :)

wtf why would she call the police and then run from them

She wants to be free not sent away to the downstate orpahnages

Why did she run from the police?

Yay! Reign escaped!

I like this so far! Please update soon I wanna know what happens!!! :)