Arranged Marriage to Andy Biersack. - Comments

Thank you! @Ellie-phant

I think it's a cute story, you should continue. (:

I'll try to update soon! Thnx! :)

omg UPDATE!!

@Kristianna-in-love
Thank you! I'll try to update soon!

i love it, please write more :)

@Rockcandypanda
Yesh I had some trouble with that during the last story inwrote. I ended up getting tired and deleting it. I'll work on that.

@Rockcandypanda
I agree with this Turtle

its good idea but with the sense of just being critical your writing is short choppy and overall blunt. Add some elaboration. Because "we laughed and went to Taco Bell. " is very blunt and not good. I love this idea but just is short and I know you can write more and make everything more enjoyable to read. I see your talent.don't hide it