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You are a very good writer. I am impressed! The wording is amazing, and I love how you describe the characters feelings. Keep up the good work!
This is the best thing ever. This is absolutely amazing. I know I said it but like holy fuck I understand and that's just so amazing. I love this story.
Aww that is so cute! This is so cute! OMG this is amazing. I just want to like dive into this story. This is perfect. OMG I understand hold fuck I understand and I'm understood and holy shit I love this.
Aww no don't cry I feel bad but thank you! You are absolutely amazing just give my your talent because I need something going for me. OMG this is amazing and this is like my favorite story ever.
Aww no don't cry I feel bad but thank you! You are absolutely amazing just give my your talent because I need something going for me. OMG this is amazing and this is like my favorite story ever.
OMG no I'm about to cry. Thank you so much, this literally means the world to me. :) @We'llBraveThisStorm
OMG OMG OMG OMG you are amazing this is amazing everything about this story and your writing style is absolutely beautiful. I'm sorry I'm seriously about to cry I just, omg. This is beautiful. Thank you. OMG thank you.
XD yeah the whole "getting to know " thing is a bit of a pain hahaha with my newest story, it's become difficult to write a chapter because i dont want it to be boring, but i dont want to rush it and i'm having a hard time finding that in between
You can tell I get bored with people getting to know each other from this and the other story :) @Andyismybatman
Sorry, I knew it was really bad wording and I didn't mean triggering SO hope you enjoy but my computer froze and I had to update it and it was really late and it was VERY STRESSFUL I'm sorry! It is changed now…
"hope you enjoy".....you're writing a tragedy here! why would people "enjoy" this?! they read it because it's a tragic romance and therefore are not supposed to "enjoy" it, they're supposed to wonder why they put themselves through the torture of reading it when they know it upsets them, but then they realize that they read it BECAUSE it upsets them and it reminds them that their human and are capable of such emotion! we do not simply "enjoy" this!!! ( P.S - :P)
I realize you probably won't see this, but if you do...well, I'd like to read more of your work on your account. Even if you are done with this, I'd still be interested in your writing. :)
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