Hollywood On The Gold Coast - Comments

@Uncontrollable_Obsessions
you're welcome

Thannkkk youoooo

@Uncontrollable_Obsessions

it's set in 2014 when the guys (in this story's timeline) are about to start on BVB 4, sometime around March/April in this story, and if you read the description for Sammi in the character list it says she's hiding something that Arsenal catches her out on, which will lead to something: "Married to Jinxx. Keyboarder in my satellite, photographer. Besties with Juliet & Ella, becomes friends with Arsenal. Goes on frequent shopping trips with Arsenal, they like to jam together, sometimes recording what they do. Mother figure to Arsenal. Sammi is hiding something which Arsenal catches her out on".

For now they get along pretty well, but once Ars figures out Sammi is hiding something big that's when their friendship deteriorates. and thanks for the compliment, chapter 8 is underway, i've just got a bit of roadblock at the moment

Is this supposed to be present I mean I dunno.. Sami and Jinxx aren't together but it's still a good story.

@TJtheTurtle
Nope, I'm Australian, why??

You're British aren't you?

@Red Girl

next 2 chapters are up :)

hi readers, chapter 3's up!!!

Can`t wait for it: )

@Red Girl
hahahaha yeah thats basically it for the first few chapters!

haha yeah what else would she be if she's practically a female ashley! XD XD XD
thanks, will upload the next chapter, should make people laugh, it made me laugh LOL

So basically ash is just confused?^^

she must look pretty hot, i mean-a female purdy, she can't be anything else than hotXD

Love chapter two: )

@Red Girl
my bad *facepalm* i'm trying to make it so that touring's been really busy and that a lot's gone on since his near miss so he wouldn't really dwell on it too much, but suddenly remembers where he's seen her before when certain things are brought up. at other points where it seems like he does but doesn't know her it's usually cos he's thinking really hard about something, hopefully you'l see what i mean (i'm not usually too good at explanations)

Wow, this is damn awesome! Can't wait for the next chapter!
One thing though: it's a little confusing how ashley knows her name at first, then he doesn't...and shouldn't he remember the girl who saved him?^^