Disapproved Love - Comments

Awww, the kiss was amazing, who knew my little bam could be such a suductive writer

Thank you,I'm sorry I'm posting from my phone so its hard to put it into paragraphs because it just goes into one huge lump :s I will soon just got a writers block :L thank you though :) x

but...UPDATE!!! besides the awkward layout, i the storyline is epic

it's a good idea but you need to work on punctuation and you need to put in paragraphs cos it's very hard to follow

it's a good idea but you need to work on punctuation and you need to put in paragraphs cos it's very hard to follow