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@AshleighPurdy
ok)

@Andy Lambert

okay messaged me the stuff you want me to sort out x x x

@AshleighPurdy
of course, i want! :)

@Andy Lambert

if you want I can correct the translation cause the aren't exactly right x x x

@AshleighPurdy
i write it on russian and then i will translate it on english

@Andy Lambert
Awesome! x x x

@AshleighPurdy
;) i m planning to write new fic soon))

@Andy Lambert
Glad you think so. let me know if you would like help :) x x x

@AshleighPurdy
it is very good :)

@Andy Lambert

I thought you might not speak it well but I didn't want to offend you if you wasn't :s lol and yes I would love to help! I help a friend of mine who missed school. :) I like helping x x x

@AshleighPurdy
oh thank u very much!
no, i don't) i'll be very thankful if u help me;) cause english isn't my native language

Hey I really liked this and I think you should make it longer :) I had trouble making sense of it though :s I am not being mean I promise!!! Just wanna help!!!! Do you have a grammar check? I would be happy to help you if you don't. I am a little ocd with fanfictions sorry. I still loved it though :) x x x

@Laman Lambert.
Thank you very much! :)

The last rows are really touching!
Liked your story very much. You're an amazing author!
I'll wait for your new works!:)

@I'm all alone
I'll think about it)

YOU SHOULD UPDATE!!!